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T.R. Girill

by T.R. Girill
STC Fellow

T. R. currently manages the East Bay STC’s Technical Literacy Project.

The Plan

In March 2007, I joined a Yahoo! Groups (e-mail list) of teachers to more widely share EBSTC's technical literacy project materials and strategies. This article looks back on the first year of that adventure in literacy outreach by e-mail.

The launch of EBSTC's own e-mail list for chapter members in August 2006 introduced me to the idea of using Yahoo groups as a way to alert more teachers about technical writing possibilities for their classes. A search of available groups turned up one founded in 2003 by science teacher and educational consultant John Brishcar. It is called High School Science Teachers (or HSST for convenience).

When I joined HSST it had 175 members; subscribership grew steadily to over 240 today (about five times as many participants as EBSTC's own group). List members teach science (often biology) in high schools across the United States; a few teach in English-language schools abroad. HSST is also affiliated with a 1000-member Yahoo group focused on middle school science teachers. Some members and postings overlap among these two mailing lists. In 2007, HSST saw 300 messages posted (averaging 25 postings/month, but rising and falling with the seasonal demands of the school year). Most posted messages address common problems, such as finding lab work that students with very different abilities can handle or how to teach from a cart if you have no permanent science classroom. HSST's official theme is "we can't go on teaching in isolation."


The Postings

Because the technical literacy project adapts practical, real-life, technical writing cases into scaffolded, age-appropriate classroom activities (especially helpful for underperforming students), sharing these ideas on HSST could greatly broaden our professional development reach. So my postings (roughly once a month) to this group/list summarized highlights from those activities (and pointed out how each reflects what scientists have discovered about effective nonfiction communication).

During 2007-2008, these "technical writing in science class" postings fell into three thematic clusters:

  • Theme 1: Cognitive Apprenticeship
    Cognitive apprenticeship builds writing skills in science class in the same reliable way (scaffolds, iterative refinement, and externalizing hidden techniques) that traditional apprenticeship builds trade skills.
    • April 2007: Using explicit guidelines promotes and enables writing/editing practice.
    • September 2007: Text revisions have a place in science class because they have a place in real-life science.
    • November 2007: Revealing the method(s) behind stage illusion parallels revealing the methods behind effective technical writing.
    • December 2007 : Mapquest driving directions can show good instruction-design features even for developmentally disabled students.
  • Theme 2: Lessons from Linguistics
    Text linguists have made empirical discoveries about technical prose that can help students improve how they write about science.
    • June 2007: Students can learn to draft better instructions by treating text as a matrix of actions and items.
    • October 2007: Rebuilding big, complex descriptions from their randomized text chunks can provide guided practice in text design.
    • January 2008: Paying extra attention to proleptic and connective words disproportionately improves technical text.
  • Theme 3: The CSI Connection
    The real-life role of good communication in successful crime scene investigation can both motivate and guide building writing skills in the classroom.
    • July 2007: DNA extraction from human cheek cells nicely models strengths and weaknesses in instruction design.
    • August 2007: A CDC reporting form for sudden unexplained infant death (SUID) nicely models strengths and weaknesses in description design.
    • February 2008: CSI court testimony nicely models techniques by which students can improve their classroom science talks.

Assessment

As someone who enjoys the intensity of working directly in a classroom setting, I find offering professional development by e-mail tame by comparison. But as a publisher I can't ignore the serious advantages of such online education: low personal cost, stunningly wide reach, and time flexibility that benefits the poster and the readers alike. Active high-school teachers can read and return to the HSST technical-writing posts whenever their busy schedules allow.

And although I have summarized much the same material in person every July since 2006 for teachers attending a week-long on-site "academy" hosted by U.C. Davis's Edward Teller Education Center in Livermore, I would have to present more than a decade of those annual sessions to come close to influencing the many science teachers that have read the HSST list in just one year.


An Invitation

To learn more about the literacy outreach project, to suggest a teacher who might want to host future technical writing workshops for their classes, or to participate yourself, please contact T.R.Girill (trgirill@acm.org). Top of page



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